Hey Julie
I really appreciated your interpretation and analysis of Neilson’s poem here. I really liked the fact that you went so in-depth with regards to making a connection with Neilson’s line “Is it east or west” and the two distinct and different ways of thinking – I never made that connection myself. I will say that although your interpretation is well informed and thought through, the structure of your thoughts is a little unordered. I’m really impressed with your work, and look forward to reading more from you! Good job!
https://aylinjulieanalin.wordpress.com/2017/10/03/blog-7/comment-page-1/#comment-28
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