I really enjoyed reading your letter to Miss Slattery and can see you are incredibly passionate about the matter (which is always great to see)! I loved that you have such a firm and logical response to Miss Slattery and Szabo’s problematic relationship. However, I do feel that you were a little harsh on Miss Slattery herself. I feel as if you placed a lot of pressure on her to “represent Australian women” when she is merely a woman, an Australian woman, trying to figure out what she wants/needs for herself, and how she will go about portraying that to the world.
Keep up the passionate writing!